Wednesday, March 24, 2010

Draft from Essay #1

One big issue that wal-mart is afraid of are The unions, as Karen Olsson stays in her essay " Up against wal-mart" on page 344 " Across the country, workers have launched a massive drive to organize a union at wal-mart, demaning better wages and working conditions", meaning that workers are doing everything they can to be listened and to be taken serious. Wal-mart is so afraid of unions that they have set up surveillance cameras to monitor workers, for preventing them from formig an union and they also are firing union supporters. I beileve workers should speak up for themself because wal-mart is going over their limits and breaking the law by interrogating and invading a person private space without a legal paper saying that they have the right to do it.

This paragraph goes on the middle of my essay and is one of the topics that im planing to talk about.

1 comment:

  1. Good, strong paragraph. The stuff about the cameras is specific enough that you want a source even if it's not a direct quote. And I'm curious about 'private space' - do you think the workplace is or should be private?

    I look forward to reading more!